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The art looks so good on this game, congrats!

I love this visual novel so match ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—

All in love and war will has a second part? 
Btw i loved and enjoyed a lot the novel was so sweet and amazing.

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Great to hear you loved the VN! All in Love and War will have a build that will continue and complete the story in the near future, it's just going to take some time since I'm really busy with stuff. 

will you spearhead another project like this in the future?

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My next project will have beefy old men, Marines, and age-gap relationships, but it will also be non-linear and be more lighthearted, so take that as you will.

Honey sweetie lovely Jaydy! What a name! I'm kinda jealous for Jayden, he has a cute nickname. I feel like when Hardy (my type) calls me Jaydy, my heart will jump for a split sec and get blushed in an instant. 

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Haha! Jaydy is a nice nickname, maybe you can get your friends to call you that. I'm glad my VN is pushing the right type of buttons for you.

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IMO, I would add that Jaydy name feels like a secret code between them, it's like there is another world that only the two of us exist there. If spoken with such a tone, it will feel sensual in a way that it brings arousal. It's like there is a shortcut which lead to a boner thing (oops), especially if it's spoken from the one you adore or obsessed (in this case, Hardy is). But if my friends were to call that it will be weird. Looking forward to see the couple's story in the future. 

That's a very creative interpretation of the use of the nickname. You make it sound very intimate. I could see why you wouldn't want your friends to call you that. Expect to see the rest of the story soon(ish)!

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Ah, intimate, I guess that's what I'm trying to say, considering Hardy himself to give the name, so it do feels intimate. I also love the way you create awkward scenes about them, such as  the morning scene in Hardy's dorm room and the entrance to the motel ones. It's funny and I can feel the awkward and clumsiness between the two of them, trying to overcome it. for they are trying to be discreet. I would love to have another moments alike.

Haha, glad you like those moments. I may or may not have more of those in the next build.

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I love the VN you are doing a fantastic job, I love older daddy love interest and there are so hard to find in games im glad i found this one. I was thinking maybe you could consider using the drinking game to pick your preference with Hardy . Just an interesting idea that crossed my mind. I love to play a submissive character  which could make for fun  dynamic considering military ranks but by using the conversation option route a player can land on the dynamic of  dominant verse or whatever they want in a fun way and then play over for another dynamic if they wish. Just throwing out an idea. Love the game and look foward to future updates :)

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That sounds interesting, I'll consider adding it to the game later on but no promises. Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks for reading my comment :) and that's fine i just figured it would be a fun way to use the scene or interactions with Hardy in general. But even if it never happens it could possibly spark an idea more inline with your vision of the game i'll be with that too 

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I liked the new update and can't wait to see more.

For NSFW scenes, I'm trying not to spoil here, let me just say I hope we can also have scenes where Jay and Hardy's roles are reversed in the future. Or perhaps, make both of them vers and let players choose what they want?

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Okay, I'll definitely consider that when writing the rest of the story!

*gasps* that's a -spoiler- o-o 

( อกยฐ อœส– อกยฐ)

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1 minute ago lmao

I want to read more. Any plans for a patreon?

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It won't take long for me to finish the VN. I don't have any plans for Patreon right now, though that might change later when I work on other projects. You can donate to me at: Ko-fi.com/chellaytiger however if you so wish.

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Hey !

Very nice bitter-sweet game ;-)

The characters are nice looking and well written, well done !

The story is short but enjoyable, good luck for the following...

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Thank you, and thanks for all the feedback!

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I just finished the first play through and I absolutely love it! I love the characters, the way it's developing... you're doing a wonderful job! I can't wait for the next installment! I filled out the survey, too, and I hope you take the feedback into consideration. Keep up the great work, my friend! Congrats on an awesome first VN ๐Ÿ‘ 

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Thanks for the lovely praise, Brian! I will definitely take your feedback in mind!

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It's the most beautiful visual novels I read the atmosphere among the two personalitiesam Iโ€™m n love with this thank you for this lovely work I'm very excited about the upcoming updates.๐Ÿ˜

Are you going to run another project when this visual novel is over?๐Ÿง

 I'm so excited to see more of your work. ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿฝโ€โ™‚๏ธ

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Aww, thank you for the kind words! I am planning to make another VN after I'm done working on this! It will be a dating sim, so stay tuned for that!

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So excited ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿฝโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿฝโ€โ™‚๏ธ

I love this game espically the age gap that's cute but curious is the MC going to have other paths with other choice or just way Romance ?

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It's just going to have one route with one ending.

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Really great start to an amazing story! The only thing that seemed off to me was how fast the Jayden said "I love you" to Hardy. A moment ago Jayden says "I like you" and then Hardy tells Jayden that he loves him. Jayden then says I love you back to Hardy even though he just admitted to liking Hardy a moment ago and it seems a bit forced. They may have known each other for years but Jayden only realizes his affection for Hardy during the party which was only a day ago. It just seemed to move too fast for Jayden to say "I love you" to Hardy. Just my personal opinion though. Other than that, I love the story and the romance. The artwork is also charming. Keep up the amazing work!

Ah, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the VN that much! As for that specific moment regarding Jayden, Jayden felt a little embarrassed saying "I love you" at first, but then when he heard Hardy say "I love you" he felt like saying "I love you" back. This will be addressed later in the story.

Ahh, I see. Thanks for the clarification!

I want to Android download it game pls,  thx

I just added an Android version!

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Oh I loved art. ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ’—

I'll enjoy it as much as possible. ๐Ÿคญ

And will this be  for Android devices In the future. Because I'd rather play visual novel on the phone. ๐Ÿง

Thank you for this lovely visual novel ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ’ 

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I just added an Android version!

Ohh great ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿฝโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿƒ๐Ÿฝโ€โ™‚๏ธ

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I cannot install this. It says "cannot read property build of undefined"

love it the plot are also great! keep it up

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